让发丝随着簸谷的风轻飘；

Thy hair sort-lifted by the winnowing wind;

剑光犹若流萤，轻飘无声的往东方锦的肩膀刺去。

Sword only still whether stream Ying, easily drift breathed eastwards the shoulder sting of square brocade go.

兴趣点过多则太过繁复而该区超重，其他区域则感觉轻飘。

Too many points of interest in one section of your image can leave it feeling too 'heavy' or complicated in that section of the shot and other parts feeling 'empty'.